Learn to create powerful college admissions essays that increase your chances of admission to top universities.

It will only take the admissions officer one glance to realize these essays are wonderfully different.

Don’t improvise the most crucial writing of your young life.

Space is limited…

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Dear Friend,

You know these essays need to be great.

You sit down, ready to write.

You crack your knuckles and take a deep breath.

The cursor blinks.

You type, delete. Type, delete.

Staring at the blank page, you know this isn’t just another essay. It’s your one shot to make an impression.

An hour flies by.

Then another.

Overwhelmed, you think:

• Why is this so hard?

• What if my story isn’t interesting enough?

• I’ve been writing for years, but writing about myself is so different.

Well, it’s true. College application essays are different.

There’s a massive difference between writing a paper for a class and writing to persuade a college admissions officer to act on your behalf.

And there’s a right and wrong way to go about it.

These essays aren’t just a shopping list of your accomplishments. Admissions officers aren’t interested in that.

They want to know the stuff you are made of.

After all, this will be their main resource for deciding whether you are a good fit.

To do this, you must be authentic, engaging, and persuasive, proving that you deserve to be there.

Most students never learn how to write in a way that engages or persuades.

This could be your advantage.

Because it’s the student with the better essay that will get admitted.

And in some cases, it’s even the student with a better essay and fewer achievements.

That’s how important these can be.

So, the fear regarding these college admissions essays is warranted.

However, this fear can be a good thing.

That fear is proof you care. Now, let’s turn it into confidence.

You can do many things to prepare for your essays.

You can study all the successful essays other students have written in the past…

You can research deeply what college admissions officers like to see in these essays…

You can even ask AI for help…

But nothing, and I mean NOTHING, will improve your writing faster than working with a professional writer one-on-one.

Is it the only way?

Maybe. Or maybe I’m wrong.

You could watch thousands of hours of YouTube videos on effective writing.

Maybe you could read stacks of books on writing— there are some very good ones out there.

Or maybe you could scroll through TikTok college essay hacks, but do you want to gamble your future on that?

But I’m sure of one thing…

Relying on those options will take ages.

However, if you are here, reading this, you are likely on a deadline.

It’s difficult enough to apply for schools while you are still in school doing school things.

It’s much quicker to sit down with someone who knows what they’re doing.

And that’s what I’m offering.

Top Choice Writing is different. 

I’m not an ex-admissions officer.

I’m not an Ivy League graduate fresh off my dissertation.

And I don’t run a massive tutoring company that churns out thousands of generic edits.

I’m a professional writer.

Other coaches might know a successful essay when they read one, but are they trained to develop one from scratch?

I am…

Also, they likely aren’t aware of the mechanics behind what makes something grab your attention, spark curiosity, or motivate action.

I do…

These may be called essays, but they are actually advertisements.

These must go beyond informing the reader about your features and credentials. They need to dive deep into the benefits you bring to the school.

And like advertisements, they must trigger an emotional response that propels the reader to act in your favor.

And there are proven techniques to do this that other essay coaches haven’t been exposed to.

Don’t worry, I’m here to teach you.

And I assure you these techniques will increase your chances of admittance.

However, they can take years to learn and apply, especially if you try to do it alone.

With me, you’ll get:

• Quick feedback

• Research help

• Tailored advice

• Line edits on your writing

• Help with structuring your essay

This will give you the real, tangible support you need to make your college application essays stand out.

While these essays aren’t the only considerations when determining whether a student is a good fit, they are becoming more important as universities become increasingly competitive.

They can equally help or hurt your chances.

They can position you at the top or push you down to the middle or bottom of applicants.

The latter is not where you want to be.

What to expect? 

Imagine the sense of calm you’ll experience when all of this is behind you.

When your fate is no longer in your hands, and you know that you’ve done everything in your power to make these essays as strong as they can be.

With my help, you can expedite that feeling!

You will have a coach by your side, sharing your mission.

I believe in delivering you more value and guidance until these essays are as good as they can be.

Here’s how we’ll get there.

First, we’ll be exploring the experiences that make you unique and the goals you aspire to achieve.

From here, we will research the university’s curriculum, facilities, and recent news.

Then, we will zoom in and out to find the thread that connects your experiences to that school.

This prep work will be the foundation for all the prompts that follow.

We will then learn to develop leads that grab the reader’s attention and never let go.

And finally, how to tell your story in a way that keeps the reader wanting more and ignites their imagination.

I will be providing specific tips and tricks to improve your writing along the way.

I’ll be your coach.

I’ll be your mentor.

I’ll be your friend.

Whatever you want to call it, I’m here to help you get better results.

I’m not going to write it for you.

However, I will give you more detailed feedback and suggestions than you will find anywhere else.

While my services aren’t cheap, there are clear reasons for that.

One, you will be getting a lot of my time. Calls back and forth, messages and feedback, emails, and research assistance. Whatever you need to make these perfect and ready to ship.

Two, you will be receiving knowledge that will go far beyond this situation and help your written communication skills for many years to come.

Three, it’s pricey because I need to know you are serious. I will be putting in an enormous amount of effort, and I need assurances that you will be doing the same.

Your success is my success.

It’s also because this coaching is unique compared to what other services at a similar price are willing or able to provide.

We will be completing a single batch of essays for one school every 1-2 weeks.

However, these results are only possible if you can give these essays the appropriate amount of time and effort each week. It’s a significant commitment.

With that being said, I know that this service isn’t affordable for everyone.

That’s why, through Top Choice Writing, you’ll find plenty of free guides and content to help navigate these essays.

After all, Top Choice Writing is about learning to be a more effective communicator.

This kind of writing creates opportunities.

This is writing for life!

It’s an investment in yourself and your future.

That’s because a great college essay can be the difference between an acceptance and a rejection—or even winning a scholarship.

If you also see it this way, I encourage you to take the leap and join me.

After you sign up, I will quickly email you so that we can arrange our first chat and go through the onboarding process.

From here, we will learn more about each other and create a plan to help you achieve your goals.

I’ll stop rambling now because if you are still reading, you are probably ready to get started.

But spaces are limited. So, if you are serious about getting into your dream school, now’s the time to make it happen.